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Currently working on a pilot episode which someone might hopefully pay me for one day, and hoping at this stage just for any feedback, questions, ideas, inspiration.
The Dumbleweeds are Gus the Tapir and Lenny the Llama. They really really want to get a sports car but nobody will give them a job. They manage to pick up a gig playing at the local cantina and although they aren't very good, people just seem to love them. They make it big, get their sports cars but then get into some trouble they didn't forsee....